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Out of context: Reply #25

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  • luckyorphan0

    Crit: Legibility is not really too bad, but I would lose the head. Strip away your multiple messages and get to the point – your script treatment is feminine enough. If you're ickle, and thus, small, reflect that in your logo. Play with how the word sits within the circle. Perhaps it sits low, as in it's not too tall. I think it is stronger on its own, and outside the circle, frankly. But watch how your letter forms merge from one to the other, and into something else. At times, I see "ickle," and others, I see "idle."

    My two cents.

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