critique, if you please?

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    Nice illustrations, but I wonder if you're trying to get too much of the story into the print. It wont work like this, as others have said, but rather than thickening the lines... which in my humble opinion wont actually help the legibility at teeshirt viewing distance anyway... have you considered just taking one moon, one head, one device, and one tree, and making a bigger, abstract sort of totem pole out of them?

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