Concert Poster - Critique

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  • ilovesamwich0

    I agree w baseline...kern the headline & refine illustration.
    also rosewood is overused, you could probably find better.

    overall I think the composition needs more balance. maybe make the illustration larger, set at the bottom and the tentacles reach to the top? the type at the bottom can be a lot smaller. i'd play w/ its placement so it doesn't look just thrown in at the bottom.
    I hope you can do a full bleed.

    • yeah, bleeds would help outbaseline_shift
    • full bleed is out. Sorry. The bands budget only allows for a certain printer that rhymes with Shminkos.Knuckleberry
    • ah, shminkos. now known as "bedex blahfice" if you're feelin ballsy you could trim the margins by hand!ilovesamwich

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