Another Dope Cargo Folio
Another Dope Cargo Folio
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I find a lot of your type usage to be pretty unrefined, for example that nike "air yeezy" piece is ruggued. Those paragraph indentations are far too deep, and the leading on cooper black that tight really doesn't do you any favors. I think you need to work on some basic type theory, your work looks like ti shows some promise, but honestly, some of these things are rudimentary problems, simple, simple stuff. You just need to bury yourself in some key books, and crack back at it.
I realize this wasn't a crit thread, but, I needed a break.
- thanks man! i appreciate your honesty and time. I will def go back and try to tighten things up.dirtylittlesecret