My First Flash Video

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  • rzrffglyr0

    Give the copy more variety in how it comes in, possibly have large blurbs of text in some frames and then emphasize smaller portions in others. The fading motion along with the music is almost trance-like so it makes this piece hard to focus on for a long amount of time. If you need to have so much copy, you should bulk a lot of it together. Introduce more relevant visuals between the content too.

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