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  • Pumpkin_baby0

    It's a little text heavy. Your headlines pop, but something about your text makes me not want to read it. In addition, adding highlight and bold to an important point doesn't scream I want to read this, it says why bother reading the rest.

    Look at more typical uses of type hierarchy.

    I like what you've done with the portfolio section, although, way too much info again. Give em a taste and see if they bite. The thumbnail could be larger, but I like the functionality of clicking it.

    With the portfolio, it's always a refining process. Keep at it!

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