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• Nairn0

  I don't like the s - if only because it causes so much space as it is - not that the general idea is bad. I think it all needs mussing up a little - the X counters given a little more grit and GRR, the antenna a little more perspective and force - maybe a hint of a kink in one arm? Not sure. I would, however, increase the focus on the antennas enough so that the gap between it and the top of the word accompanies the space between the two words a bit better - one's wide, one's not, you know?

  Prefer the monochrome versions too. Good luck!

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  • "so much space as it is" = "sp much space around it". don't know how that happened.Nairn
  • cheers nairn. very thorough. i'll knock one up with a normal S now.hitsuji
  • and ive been trying to put a kink in it but it keeps looking a bit shit. maybe im tiredhitsuji

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