newsletter crit

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  • lind0

    I think the newsletter is acceptable as is...since you have a deadline for this issue and I'm sure you'll do more newsletters with stronger designs

    Anyhow, maybe use a solid magenta or pink background instead of the blue gradient. The same magenta and pink as in the photo at the top. I wouldn't use drop shadows for the text. There's no other drop shadows in the newsletter -- so it seems out of place.

    For quick links at the bottom -- since it's white text, it doesn't seem like hyperlinks. Maybe put arrows in front of them, like this >

    Also put the copyright information in black text instead of gray. So that it would balance the black background just above it.

    Hey, hope you also critique my newsletter -- I think I have to create mines in a week or so :)

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