The Parlor
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- juhls0
Heh, you put that you are Canadian. I would suggest either making the first letter of each line a capital letter, or adding a comma at the end of the first line (after your name).
Regarding the quote: I think you should have one on each page to be consistent. Right now I don't see it on the work page. Hmmm...maybe that's OK though, since you don't want to clutter that page too much. The quotes take up a lot of space though.
See where it says "This is the personal portfolio of dan heffernan a canadian graphic designer" above the image with the same text? Are you keeping that? The font seems a bit off for that too.
What's that little + and - animation at the bottom for?
Add more line-height to the text on each page.
I'm guessing you're still working on the links to the images of navigation on each page.
I like the work page. How do you plan on putting more than 8 projects in there? Have a little number "2" above and below the thumbnails that the user can click on?
lol @ "Like a giant dildo crushing the sun."
I'm not sure you need those little star icons beside each comment. Maybe make it smaller?
I like its simplicity.