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  • zenmasterfoo0

    I know the client loves it, but the background is awful. no way around that one I guess? If you can convince them to pull it into the page as something else, maybe a header bg treatment, hell I don't know it hurts looking at it.

    Some other suggestions
    1) The top header background is troubling to the eye. Oh geesh, it's all troubling but those rings are bugging me. Lose them.
    2) Try to call out the navigation some more. The hover states seem very under-designed.
    3) Reverse the toggle graphics in the front page flash. My eyes tell me to click on the opposite one
    4) The curves on your footer treatment aren't working. Not to mention it seems way tall just for two logos. Reduce their size and make that white space less tall as well.
    5) Bring in some instructional text for each interior page. The recipes page just begs for it.
    6) your content padding is over the top. Lessen that up some. Tightening up your content might make it look like you have more.

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