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  • twokids0

    sorry to be a wet blanket, but I don't like several things:

    too much space at the top....what's that about? doesn't add anything

    overreliance on clever copy..."Design is as Design Does"? who cares? I want to see the work. Plus all those carefully written and laid out sections on the home page? are just there for show....oh i see! the navigation is at the top but your design is making me read all this marketing fluff at the bottom...

    The work is difficult to see...the samples I did see took too long to get going...long opening animations...are you selling Motion Design?

    yeah and the logos on the monitors should go...

    sorry it just seems like a bunch of marketing b.s. with difficult to use navigation

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