Student portfolio critique

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• Iggyboo0

  Wait Kaonashi brings up a good point but I dont think he did retrace an old logo it looks like he redid one...

  http://www.flickr.com/photos/haw… this looks like a totally different mark. And frankly if he did the swooshy logo the new one on his own.. it shows three things.. One he's aware of logo trends, two he's aware of good marketing because that advertisement on the bottle system is cool, and three he's pretty much brought back an older brand which is something beer companies have been doing forever and I am suprised its taken so long to happen in the cola market.

  Props sell the concept at least try too its sweet.

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  • but your typography needs cleaning up especially on your self ID. you gotta change the kerning. good luck man.Iggyboo
  • Yep you're correct, as I wrote in the text about the project: "The logotype is based on a old Jolly Cola logo from the 70's."Nutter
  • Alright I'll look into that, thanksNutter

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