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  • VectorMasked0

    yeah, the X and the 2.0 need work.

    The X looks unfinished. The angles don't quite work yet. It doesn't have the depth/dimension in should have. I think the right bottom part of the x needs to be extended a little to the right to add more "dynamism". The fact that both right ends of the X end in the exact same vertical line makes it look fake or static.

    The 2.0 would have to be a little bolder. The "period" stands out too much. Customize it to almost match the thickness of the strokes in the 2.0.

    Good luck with this. Looks like it could be a fun gig if you do get to do some collateral.

    • "but just the x and the 2.0, everything else is great"scarabin_net

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