Constructive Criticism
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Too much black. You certainly don't want people to print your pdf portfolio at all.
The red and black don't work too well here.
Gray line around your site doesn't look good. Why is that flash anyways?Cover of front page looks unfinished. Grids in the pdf are very inconsistent.
You using MrsEavesBold for all the descriptions, except onpage 10, where you are using MrsEavesRoman.
Choose asecondary typeface. MrsEaves is actually not working well at all. Now if you wanna keep it, using in headers, but not as running text. It's not readable against black. MrsEavesBold is too strong and muddy and MrsEavesRoman's letterforms are not well defined.
Go with a clean typeface for this. You want people to read it.Overall type needs a lot of work. there's issues with the grid and the hierarchy.
Your cv is hard to scan.