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  • fyoucher10

    But for real...

    Good job. What might be nice is bringing some life outside of the boxes. Maybe the top of the girls head comes out of the box and into the white area.

    I also feel like there's a bit too much white space up top and that it's also making the nav appear lower than it should. Make rethink how you're stacking all of the elements up top and consolidate it a bit.

    I dig the African-like pattern towards the bottom. Might be a nice touch to have that incorporated somewhere else up top.

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    • I agree. something needs to break out. Overall it is a great start, just simple tweaks needed.capn_ron
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