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    I did think it was pretty morbid. I imagine thats the idea you are trying to push. So it works in context, i suppose, but i imagine its gonna turn people off. Especially that first wrist slitting page.

    To be honest, i feel like the illustrations are a little clunky. I think lightening up some of the line weights might help. I also noticed some spots (in some of the fingers, in particular) where it looks like you might have an anchor point to many, and there are wonky little curves. Also, the overlapping of some of the strokes creates awkward line weights.

    Also, id love an explanation of what im donating a fiver to.

    Compelling project, though. I like the simplicity.

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