Critique please
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- Iggyboo0
Critiques served warm....
#1 your site loader is kinda lame for the amount of time it took on my fios account. It's playful but the mark didn't connect me to your brand which I didn't see anywhere after loading nor did I remember it. -1
#2 The site itself is well developed that's not the problem but your projects look like images from a flickr and theirs no definition of what your looking at before you click, it's difficult to navigate due to this and the whole time I was looking at your motion graphic work I wished you just had a motion video of the graphics you did.
#3 The photo choices are quite lovely but because there are so many on the page and because the developed site has such a springy bottom piece it's difficult to focus without getting distracted. I think due to this I'd minimalize what you have on your space when your viewing without removing your navigation system. As is its too much for the eye without getting annoyed. It's like looking at a house with red siding with blue shutters and white lining. Too much is fighting.
Well overall I like the depth of your content and thought the work you did individually was much better than the site content, it does lack branding and I'd work on fixing your pallette the light green wasn't for me.
-Joseph