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    Type needs to be reworked coz it seems a little sloppy.
    Layout needs a grid. Within this grid you could arrange the type in columns. Not in long sentences that go from left to right and that go against the comfortable reading length.

    Projects (imgs and text) need more division in between them. They look like they are just floating.

    (Learn More) <- Looks weird. This goes better at the end of a paragraph and not in the header as it becomes part of the header.

    Site's texture seems ugly. maybe you felt it needed something so you just relied on this quick background texture.

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