my sci-fi film
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OK, I am always eager to comment on films.
The film start like a kubrick film. Unfortunately it is a bit short. Because from the moment the man enters the screen the viewers focus goes to the person. Instead I would spent more time to shown the location, to let the viewer get acquinted with the setting and to set the mood. You can easily develop a top location like this as an character itself.
I would have started with the woman before the man. The woman has more charism and personlity. But this is just opinion.
I think the part between this scene and the whole paint shit scene is a bit long. It is impossible for the viewer to see where the movie is going to. It reminds me of Albert Pyun I have recently seen. Although you do a much better job than him I must admit. The whole setting is perfect though, but it lacks a bit of story-development. or tension.
The relationship between the two is also unclear and therefor the viewer does not know how to interpret the scene.I like the contrast between the scenery and mood of the movie and the paint things. Although the whole purpose of these thing remain unclear to me.
To conclude I think the whole scenery, location and mood in the film is good. The story lacks development and cannot grib the viewers intention.
Good luck anyway, cuase I can see you are a talented filmmaker.