blaw: new site

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  • Fariska0

    You won't like me after.

    The site doesn't work at all, either in displaying your work and your approach to design. It lacks so many fundamental elements such as:
    - Boldness
    - Personality
    - Visual order and hierarchy
    - Clearness
    - Immediate feeling that your work is great.

    There are so many details that look unfinished that the whole thing has kind of amateurish feeling.
    And sorry, but the wordpress template is not an excuse, but most likely a chance to get the best out of it.

    So since your work is great and amazing, and for once you're the client of yourself, pull out a design that is in line with your personality and your approach. You clearly are capable of it.
    The work displayed in there is screaming (metal-style) for a great site.

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