Gig next thurs - The Mentalists @ Water Rats
Gig next thurs - The Mentalists @ Water Rats
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- vespa0
ok crit my flyer then you bastards!
disclaimer 1: i know avant garde is played out BUT I STILL LIKE IT
disclaimer 2: i also know that the kerning between 1 and 5 in the date sucks. i'm too lazy to change it cos it's already published everywhere.- Not sure about the font, but I like the poster. MySpace makes the quality of images shite.Jaline
- Do you have a drop shadow on the letter "g"s in "Magna Saga"?Jaline
- I would line up the myspace.com URL on the right, with the title "Jan 15 @..." at the topJaline
- Or just test it out. It may make things more awkward, who knows.Jaline
- Another thing: the text doesn't line up properly on the left ("The Mentalists" and the other names)Jaline
- There seems to be more padding around certain text and less on others (notice there is less black space before your URL)Jaline
- URL) and more before the "EMAIL US..." text.Jaline
- Just minor things.Jaline
- you're right about lining up on the RHS, I should have dropped the Theatre, and made that text larger toovespa