Poster Crit - Rybo
Poster Crit - Rybo
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the copy is too close to the illustration,
the leading is too big.
and why are you making it hard to read the venue name??
also i think you really need to study typographic hierarchy. none of the things you have presented show a grasp of it. ie the text just looks like it was pasted in and font changed.
surely somethings are more important than others.
also that feed logo is TOO prominent. (especially in full white.) i cant stop looking at it. it draws the eye too quick.
also alignment is a mess.. 4d center aligned, copy left aligned on 4d, feed right aligned...
nice try... try again :)