portfolio crit

Out of context: Reply #4

  • Started
  • Last post
  • 29 Responses
  • Fariska0

    Not bad,
    The menu looks too compressed and dark. Work on it to make more interesting and eye-catchy.

    Be consisent on the interface:
    you got light arrows, standard Helvetica for the "menu" and "Times new roman" project description. One style will be less distracting and overall better.

    Lose the bouncing thing or make it better and smoother, looks you just used the tweener classes for the first time and you spent no effort on it.

    Would be good to have some information about you or at least some way to contact you. How a potential employer would contact you otherwise?

    The works are really good. So spend some more time crafting a proper container for them. The above may sound harsh, but is just a matter of details.

View thread