Perception Design - updated
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BannedKappa — Way way way too much text no? ??? Are you being sarcastic? What do you mean?
Not sarcastic at all man. It's all honest and just trying to help with a different point of view.
I really mean you have too much text. It almost sounds a bit like "welcome to the magical world of perception design— the place for custom made logos and webzitez!!"
Some of that text can go... like "not too savvy?" or "contact us today!!"Don't take it bad man. It's just that some of that text can sound a little old-school and perhaps make you sound a lil' small.
Also the "home" and the "about" pages are basically interchangeable. Content fits both pages and there's a little more "about you" in the main page than in the "about" page.
Could be better to reduce the content on the pain page to simplify navigation and lead people where they wanna go whether it is the portfolio, contact info, about page, etc... It's a little like an explosion of content in the main page.
- alright... understand the corporate shit you wanna sell...
cheers! :o)VectorMasked - Gotcha - thanks VM
Thanks for the constructive crit, always welcomed.BannedKappa
- alright... understand the corporate shit you wanna sell...