Site design on the right track?

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  • ian0

    Its ok, better with the muted bg pattern but perhaps you need to bump up the opacity a little, its gone somewhat washy.

    Agree that there probably too much space between the nav and content and also between the logo/nav and intro copy/content. Tighten it up a bit but not too much the whitespace is good.

    Think you could also introduce some more colour to it, its a bit flat at the moment, even a muted colour palatte of grays combined with the orange and black could lift it a little.

    Also not sure about the horizontal lines, are they needed? They just kind of float at the moment, too far away from anything. Consider dropping them altogether just to see if it frees up the page a bit.

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