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  • d_rek0

    rybo, quick crit:
    -you need to learn how to kern boy.
    -I think the typographic mark is fine, just kern it and kern it and kern it some more.
    -Try alternate color shifts for the type ie: 8 and days can be the same, everything else is different, also try applying some more color to the rest of the info.
    -The contact information is really close to the margins, if you could consolidate some of the information it might bring it in a little.

    • aye all the details on the right look completely "undesigned".
      maybe bold company name?
      23kon

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