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- abizzyman0
you got dashes slashes underscores lines and dots that are just wrecking the typography... which needs a TON of work too.
Type is KEY. It's exceptionally compressed in the kerning which works in some cases - but not lowercase colateral information like this.
Change the font all together. Go with something more geometric and visually less-complicated.
yup.. less is more.
I'm thinking a simple helvetica, avenir - akzidensk grotesque... something along those lines.
using a humanist typestle doesn't work in such a small area.
the color.. the varnish... the type of printing etc won't help a design unless the design is good to begin with.
your design isn't that great... cuz of the type and the lines - dashes etc. etc. and overly kerned humanist style font. (which probably would work better if you took the point size down a bit and went all U/C)