portfolio opinion
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- Dr_Jay0
Hopefully this won't sound too harsh...
The typography is all over the place... If you have more than a paragraph of copy to read, I'd recommend losing the all-caps minimal leading layout. It can be stylish if it's just a bit of type, but trying to read a few lines of it is just annoying.
Maybe try contrasting the bold ko all-cap type with something a bit more subtle... it would also help to visually differentiate between different elements.
About the business card: from the small image of it, I think the design is lovely...
BUT... good luck getting a printer to hold your 1 pt red bleed... it just won't happen. tolerances look a bit too tight (maybe you're gonna trim them by hand?)
also... your copy is really bad... it doesn't make you sound like a professional at all (spell check it, too).
anyway... hopefully this helps