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- Duane0
looks good - i liked your cards the other day too (and your site). here are my thoughts...feel free to ignore.
will the red on the back bleed through to the front? may be something to think about.
i think the application of your logo on the intro page could be much smaller and maybe tucked in a corner like on your bcard. in fact, maybe all pages have your logo on them in a corner. are these double-sided? if so, maybe the intro should be single sided.
i think you could keep titles large and drop descriptions down to a much smaller type size to aid in legibility and to create more of a heirarchy of information. besides, the contrast in type sizes makes it more interesting. maybe descriptions are mixed case instead of alll upper as well.
on the logo sample page, i think the mark should be smaller (1.5" or 1.75") and maybe right aligned with the cards.
on the description of the in house logo there is a widow. i realize this is just a comp but you'll want to fix that.