site crit please

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  • Nairn0

    Why are the small ethnically-diverse characters walking along a straw in to some PSD-generated clouds?

    'Generate' clouds from photographic sources - that PSD stuff is horried when used literally like that.

    The logo isn't quite as prominent as it should be - again, a consequence of not paying attention to the cloud area.

    I feel the rollover state background should be a little deeper.

    Get rid of those PSD clouds.

    Message and base nav text might benefit from being a little darker/more distinct.

    The PSD clouds are horrid.

    It's a fairly pretty landing-page - but how are your content ares going to look? They're the important bits.

    Oh yeah - and get rid of those clouds - they're awful.

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