site crit please

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the elephant.. the phant.. the font it is tough.
my crit is basically what VectorMasked said.
few points added:
you need more contrast on the foreground, i see what you are trying to do but it is not working.
pic change. yeah they are crazy, but they dont have to jump of to the deep end. choose something uplifting.. not just a cliche of flowers. something better. like a nice sex session depending on the market. male/female.
needs bottom links for SEO, depending on how you code the top nav.
site needs to be wider than 800px . it is not 2002. try for a max width of 1000px fixed for the homepage. liquid for the rest.
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