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Out of context: Reply #13

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  • Fariska0

    2nd is better. The box problem highlighted by ponyboy is still there.

    But mainly it lacks a bit of personality: that light gold logo is almost lost in the top and seems a bit thrown there. The headlines and general disposition of the content underneath the big image just say "boring blob to read". I can understand that the focus is photography but a bit more refinement on these aspects would shift the design from being good to being very good.

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