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• gramme0

  I'd make your crossbars a bit thinner. I would get rid of the tail on the G, it's a level of detail that doesn't exist on other letters. It looks OK large, but small it clogs a bit.

  The leg of the J looks flat. I'd tighten the curve – not too much, I know it needs to still look like an extended letter.

  The tail of the S needs a bit more upward spring in it. It's a bit soft right now.

  Letters like B, P and R need a bit more contrast for optical evenness: I'd make the horizontals thinner.

  Did you try flattening the tail of the Q so the bottom of it sits on the baseline? I'm thinking the shape would look a bit like the end of the leg in your R.

  Besides that: great work, would love to take it for a spin one day ;)

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  • But what the f— do I know...gramme
  • ;)gramme
  • thanks ofr the suggestion, I think generally its worthy to try to make those crossbars thinnermoamoa
  • Ill try what you said... sounds right... mercimoamoa

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