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• detritus0

  kerning's terrible - that s & e shouldn't be touching.
  radial loop thing is a bit generic and swooshy - doesn't fit the angel image, which in itself is too complex in relation to the letterforms.
  I don't like the way you've alternated the shades either - if I were you I'd try this one in just black and white first, to get the composition right.

  I see potential - but in its current form, it's verging on awful.

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  • ignore that last half sentence, that's not really fair. sorry.detritus

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