Constructive Criticism

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  • d_rek0

    Criticisms:

    1) The color pallette you've chosen and the heirarchy of the site puts more importance on the webpage than the actual work itself. I almost didn't know where to start looking for work when I first landed on the page.

    2) I don't see any reason why all your work can't be on one page, with much larger images. The way you're treating the work makes it feel unimportant to me.

    3) the blog / posts really aren't all that interesting at this point, they just clutter up the screen. Those are what really should be on a separate page.

    4) Do you have more work to show? 5 pieces is a little light even if they were absolute dynamite knock-out pieces.... they're good, but your portfolio doesn't feel substantial.

    5) Sometimes less is more - in terms of aesthetic, you've got a good start, just keep refining what you have.

    • thanks a lot man. I've got more things to put up, just stuck 4 random posts up to fill in spaceGORADIO
    • np!d_rek

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