Constructive Criticism
Constructive Criticism
Out of context: Reply #24
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- detritus0
You've taken it offline? In only saw it briefly before I closed it down again, but from what I remember, I'd take meffid's first suggestion seriously - look through there and see what you like, what works - then copy it, in your style. At your age and for the kind of project you're doing, you should be feeling fine with taking 'inspiration' from other people's work - it's how humans learn, after all.
From the little I do remember - your logo was flipping awful - I mean, like kindergarten krap - not nuRave and cool enough nor homespun and DIY to pull that effect off.
Also, I think there were flaws in your (non-gridded) layout and an over-reliance on photoshop effects.. but I could be wrong, 'cos I can't see the fucker now.
Wer, start simple.