Website critique
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- VectorMasked0
not digging it so much...
but... if you have to stick to that, I'd move the navigation for towards the left. it's too close to the white column and too far from the left side of the browser window. Even spaces on both sides of the navigation would look better than what you have now.
That 'extra' pixel you have on one end of the white lines is just so unnecessary, makes the menu seem a bit messy coz it looks more like noise rather than an attempt at doing that.
If you were able to move the navigation towards the left and perhaps the white content area, you could make everything fit on a resolution of 1024. It almost fits in this resolution and as of now it looks like you didn't think about widths and resolutions, which is bad.
Hope, you don't list the project on the title (browser). Your name should go there. You don't want people to bookmark your site and attempt to find 4 weeks later on their bookmarks *that* bookmark of that black portfolio site, coz the project name would get bookmarked rather than your name or an identifier.
Play more with the text at the bottom where you have the description of the project. Looks unfinished or something. Perhaps try to add a break in between the title and the actual description.
Like i said, fix your width to fit a 1024, coz you are in like 1090 which is far from the next available resolution which is 1280. This does give an impression that you lack web knowledge. This lack of knowledge is also shown with the fact that your source code indicates it was done in Dreamweaver, and you have a few empty tags in there and have a messy CSS code. Get all the CSS for the text and use an external CSS file.
- damn! it felt like I just wrote 6 lines of text.
I guess I'm not much into the design ;o)VectorMasked - Thanks I didn't consider a lot of what you mentioned. (Lack of web experience)Glitterati_Duane
- I tried doing my styles external CSS but I did something wrong and they didn't workGlitterati_Duane
- I know it's because I did something wrong though.Glitterati_Duane
- damn! it felt like I just wrote 6 lines of text.