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- detritus0
I don't like the way your logo is left-aligned to the edge of the paint spatter - i'd have the text aligned, then have the spatter bleed off screen.
i dislike the single pixel white lines you have in your tool forms.
i also dislike the aqua sheen you've elected to employ on your thumbnails - seems incoherent and faddish. also, those arrows are a bit weak.
in fact, you've got a lot of room there - why are those thumbnails so flat and inscrutable?
i'm not sure i care about your inspiration, or your philosophy.
the contact section is hurting my eyes.
i like the bits of the site where you've focused on 3 colours in a graphic environment - the photo'd bits, whilst they could provide a worthy counterbalance, don't - they're just a bit messy.
Still, i guess i quite like it overall - just needs a bit of tweaking.