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- detritus0
Not too keen on the way Beijing overlaps the date, and seeing brush script look consistently the same between letterforms is a bug bear of mine, so if you could make one of those 0s look a little different, I'd really appreciate it :)
If I were you, I'd try a version where the 'sports', 'medal tally' etc headers are on red (orm at least, not light grey) backgrounds, but I guess that might look quite heavy?
Is there any way you could 'muss up' the dragon form at top - or perhaps slightly alter the colouration across it (ie, something like a gradient), so it doesn't look like a form dumped in their and the Multiply Layer option turned on?
There's yellow in the Chinese flag too, did you consider using that anywhere?
I think it looks good though, I like.
- he's gota spot of yellow /gold but not much. i agree it needs more color7point34