DJ Event Poster Critique

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  • skwiotsmith0

    While over all the design has a nice start, it just kind of feels like you gave up. The upper portion is nice, but once you get below the 'horizon' it just falls apart. I don't seem any reason why you chose AG, why there are just two random columns of text hanging out below while the event info stretches across the entire poster.

    I don't know. It's a start, but it needs a lot of work still. I don't think the LPs are a complete disaster, but again, needs work to realize the concept better.

    First things first: there's a heirachy of sorts, but you need to finesse it a lot. The 'dj benefit' is the first thing I see, not the title of the event.

    Yeah. Hope this helps.

    • Definitely helps, skwiotsmith – thanks. The bottom columns are kind of random, because I don't yet have the info.!dog_opus
    • Sorry I was kind of all over the place with that post, but glad to know I got my point across.skwiotsmith
    • No, you're right on, and I appreciate the helpful criticism.dog_opus

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