Identity Crit - rybo
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i am being as helpful as possible here.
the sticker concept, especially paired with avant garde looks incredibly trendy and cliché. there' s little you can do about that. your concept seems to be well thought out, but unfortunatly most people will not get it and you don't have the time to explain it toeveryone.
if that's really the direction you want to go then, by all means expand it and play with it. maybe try a stamp? a bandage? patch? try a different font also... you will find that your present choice is going to promote a trendy look, but not in a good way i'm afraid. looks very MTV right now. if you decide that is the font you want, figure out why? what does that font say to you? bold? geometric? would a serif be better? seems more stable no? also play with the font and tweak/customize it. make it unique. like they have no competition. may be hard with avant garde as it is a popular font.