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  • gramme0

    I'm afraid I'm not feeling the fiber of your fabric. It looks bloated. The G is unattractive and won't hold up well at small sizes. The filled-in A is cliche. The letters KOGA are spaced too wide, my eye immediately goes to the holes, which are not well kerned. Rounded letters are fine, but those used in NINJA are too fat. They look clumsy.

    Sorry to be such a downer, but I think you need to explore other directions.

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