Dust
Dust
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- BaskerviIle0
You might also want to source a copywriter too. I've taken the liberty of pointing out some of the more obvious errors in your copy:
Hello, and welcome to Dust.
We are [a]* invite only forum for the graphic design community where only the best of the best can [just]** talk about design and show off [there]*** latest work, the world is a big place and full of dust [its]**** taking over the world.
We want to take over the world too!
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** (is this word needed?)
*** their
**** it'sAlso the 'Dust' analogy seems to be lifted straight out of Phillip Pullman's His Dark Materials trilogy which seems a little contrived.
- *ouch!phatlee
- baskerville thank you for the free copywriting lol********