Please Crit.
Please Crit.
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- cramdesign0
it is improved. however, don't right align text unless there is a very good reason or someone makes you. (only then with a fight)
Is the date the most important thing? I think that it is your title "All Dayer at the Flapper." Not an easy fix.
You are doing well to be humble with this and wise to ask this lot for opinions. Most here are pros and many are among the best in the biz... (certainly not me though). Keep at it and you will be too. Let us see where this ends up.