advice needed
advice needed
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- flashbender0
oz - less formal and less deprecating. That comes off as too meek to me.
Hi [name],
I hope you are having a great Friday!Meeting you on the train yesterday really made my day, that would have been enough to keep me smiling the rest of the day, but getting to chat with you after we got off at the same stop has put a silly grin on my face that doesn't seem to be going away.
Since we live in the same area how would you like to go out for drinks in the neighborhood sometime?
hoping your day is as good as mine,
[name]- playa's got the words....robotron3k
- yes yes yes
alicetheblue - really?********
- That works very well...TheBlueOne
- nice. liking that.Samush
- this is great!ozhanlion
- Too cheesy for me. At least change the "hoping your day is as good as mine" bit.Jaline
- Pretty valid point Jaline. I'm nots old on that either OK OZ, if it works you have to name your first child "Fleshbanger"flashbender
- too cheesy for me too. no go.Tara
- really? Damn.flashbender
- well I am not cheesy in person, and this is only a conversation starter. so it should be okay I think.ozhanlion
- it's too happy happy joy joy, you dont know her and it shouldn't sound like she has turned your world upside down already which this does. it's a bit much.Tara
- this kinda does. just keep it simple and put something light/jokey in there.Tara