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    02/23/89
    Transcriber's note:

    For all you Clarke/Kubrick/2001 fans,

    I found the original paper copy of this screenplay a while back and felt
    compelled to transcribe it to disk and upload it to various bulletin
    boards for the enjoyment of all.

    The final movie deviates from this screenplay in a number of interesting
    ways. I've tried to maintain the format of the original document except
    the number of lines per page of the original. In order to reduce the
    length of this file I've used a bar of "------" to delimit the pages as
    there was a lot of whitespace per original screenplay page.

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    2001: A SPACE ODYSSEY

    Screenplay

    by

    Stanley Kubrick and Arthur C. Clark

    Hawk Films Ltd.,
    c/o. M-G-M Studios,
    Boreham Wood,
    Herts.
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    TITLE PART I
    AFRICA
    3,000,000 YEARS AGO
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    A1
    VIEWS OF AFRICAN DRYLANDS - DROUGHT

    The remorseless drought had lasted now for ten million years,
    and would not end for another million. The reign of the ter-
    rible lizards had long since passed, but here on the continent
    which would one day be known as Africa, the battle for survival
    had reached a new climax of ferocity, and the victor was not
    yet in sight. In this dry and barren land, only the small or
    the swift or the fierce could flourish, or even hope to exist.

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    A2
    INT & EXT CAVES - MOONWATCHER

    The man-apes of the field had none of these attributes, and
    they were on the long, pathetic road to racial extinction.
    About twenty of them occupied a group of caves overlooking
    a small, parched valley, divided by a sluggish, brown stream.

    The tribe had always been hungry, and now it was starving.
    As the first dim glow of dawn creeps into the cave, Moonwatcher
    discovers that his father has died during the night. He did not know
    the Old One was his father, for such a relationship was beyond
    his understanding. but as he stands looking down at the emac-
    iated body he feels something, something akin to sadness. Then
    he carries his dead father out of the cave, and leaves him for the
    hyenas.

    Among his kind, Moonwatcher is almost a giant. He is nearly
    five feet high, and though badly undernourished, weighs over
    a hundred pounds. His hairy, muscular body is quite man-like,
    and his head is already nearer man than ape. The forehead is
    low, and there are great ridges over the eye-sockets, yet he
    unmistakably holds in his genes the promise of humanity. As
    he looks out now upon the hostile world, there is already

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    A2
    CONTINUED

    something in his gaze beyond the grasp of any ape. In those
    dark, deep-set eyes is a dawning awareness-the first intima-
    tions of an intelligence which would not fulfill itself for another
    two million years.

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    A3
    EXT THE STREAM - THE OTHERS

    As the dawn sky brightens, Moonwatcher and his tribe reach
    the shallow stream.

    The Others are already there. They were there on the other
    side every day - that did not make it any less annoying.

    There are eighteen of them, and it is impossible to distinguish
    them from the members of Moonwatcher's own tribe. As
    they see him coming, the Others begin to angrily dance and
    shriek on their side of the stream, and his own people reply
    In kind.

    The confrontation lasts a few minutes - then the display dies
    out as quickly as it has begun, and everyone drinks his fill of
    the muddy water. Honor has been satisfied - each group has
    staked its claim to its own territory.

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    A4
    EXT AFRICAN PLAIN - HERBIVORES

    Moonwatcher and his companions search for berries, fruit
    and leaves, and fight off pangs of hunger, while all around
    them, competing with them for the samr fodder, is a potential
    source of more food than they could ever hope to eat. Yet
    all the thousands of tons of meat roaming over the parched
    savanna and through the brush is not only beyond their reach;
    the idea of eating it is beyond their imagination. They are
    slowly starving to death in the midst of plenty.

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    A5
    EXT PARCHED COUNTRYSIDE - THE LION

    The tribe slowly wanders across the bare, flat country-
    side foraging for roots and occasional berries.

    Eight of them are irregularly strung out on the open plain,
    about fifty feet apart.

    The ground is flat for miles around.

    Suddenly, Moonwatcher becomes aware of a lion, stalking
    them about 300 yards away.

    Defenceless and with nowhere to hide, they scatter in all
    directions, but the lion brings one to the ground.

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    A6
    EXT DEAD TREE - FINDS HONEY

    It had not been a good day, though as Moonwatcher had no
    real remembrance of the past he could not compare one day
    with another. But on the way back to the caves he finds a
    hive of bees in the stump of a dead tree, and so enjoys the
    finest delicacy his people could ever know. Of course, he
    also collects a good many stings, but he scacely notices
    them. He is now as near to contentment as he is ever
    likely to be; for thought he is still hungry, he is not actually
    weak with hunger. That was the most that any hominid could
    hope for.

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    A7
    INT & EXT CAVES - NIGHT TERRORS

    Over the valley, a full moon rises, and a cold wind blows down
    from the distant mountains. It would be very cold tonight -
    but cold, like hunger, was not a matter for any real concern;
    it was merely part of the background of life.

    This Little Sun, that only shone at night and gave no warmth,
    was dangerous; there would be enemies abroad. Moonwatcher
    crawls out of the cave, clambers on to a large boulder besides
    the entrance, and squats there where he can survey the valley.
    If any hunting beast approached, he would have time to get back
    to the relative safety of the cave.

    Of all the creatures who had ever lived on Earth, Moonwatcher's
    race was the first to raise their eyes with interest to the Moon,
    and though he could not remember it, when he was young,
    Moonwatcher would reach out and try to touch its ghostly face.
    Now he new he would have to find a tree that was high
    enough.

    He stirs when shrieks and screams echo up the slope from
    one of the lower caves, and he does not need to hear the

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    A7
    CONTINUED

    occasional growl of the lion to know what is happening. Down
    there in the darkness, old One-Eye and his family are dying,
    and the thought that he might help in some way never crosses
    Moonwatcher's mind. The harsh logic of survival rules out
    such fancies. Every cave is silent, lest it attract disaster.

    And in the caves, in tortured spells of fitful dozing and
    fearful waiting, were gathered the nightmares of generations
    yet to come.

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    A8
    EXT THE STREAM - INVASION

    The Others are growing desperate; the forage on their side of
    the valley is almost exhausted. Perhaps they realise that
    Moonwatcher's tribe has lost three of its numbers during the
    night, for they choose this mourning to break the truce. When
    they meet at the river in the still, misty dawn, there is a
    deeper and more menacing note in their challenge. The noisy
    but usually harmless confrontation lasts only a few seconds
    before the invasion begins.

    In an uncertainly-moving horde, the Others cross the river,
    shieking threats and hunched for the attack. They are led
    by a big-toothed hominid of Moonwatcher's own size and age.

    Startled and frightened, the tribe retreats before the first
    advance, throwing nothing more substantial than imprecations
    at the invaders. Moonwatcher moves with them, his mind a
    mist of rage and confusion. To be driven from their own
    territory is a great badness, but to lose the river is death.
    He does not know what to do; it is a situation beyond his
    experience.

    Then he becomes dimly aware that the Others are slowing

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    A8
    CONTINUED

    down, and advancing with obvious reluctance. The further they
    move from their own side, the more uncertain and unhappy
    they become. Only Big-Tooth still retains any of his original
    drive, and he is rapidly being seperated from his followers.

    As he sees this, Moonwatcher's own morale immediately
    revives. He slows down his retreat, and begins to make
    reassuring noises to his companions. Novel sensations fill
    his dim mind - the first faint precursors of bravery and
    leadership.

    Before he realizes it, he is face to face with Big-Tooth, and
    the two tribes come to a halt many paces away.

    The disorganized and unscientific conflict could have ended
    quickly if either had used his fist as a club, but this
    innovation still lay hundreds of thousands of years in the
    future. Instead, the slowly weakening fighters claw and
    scratch and try to bite each other.

    Rolling over and over, they come to a patch of stony ground,
    and when they reach it Moonwatcher is on top. By chance,

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    A8
    CONTINUED

    he chooses this moment to grab the hair on Big-Tooth's scalp,
    and bang his head on the ground. The resulting CRACK is
    so satisfactory, and produces such an immediate weakening
    In Big - Tooth's resistance, that he quickly repeats it.

    Even when Big-Tooth ceases to move for some time, Moon-
    watcher keeps up the exhilirating game.

    With shrieks of panic, the Others retreat back, across the
    stream. The defenders cautiously pursue them as far as
    The water's edge.

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    EXT CAVE - NEW SOUND

    Dozing fitfully and weakened by his stuggle, Moonwatcher is
    startled by a sound.

    He sits up in the fetid darkness of the cave, straining his
    senses out into the night, and fear creeps slowly into his soul.
    Never in his life - already twice as long as most members of
    his species could expect - has he heard a sound like this. The
    great cats approached in silence, and the only thing that
    betrayed them was a rare slide of earth, or the occasional
    cracking of a twig. Yet this is a continuing crunching noise
    that grows steadily louder. It seemed that some enormous
    beast was moving through the night, making no attempt at
    concealment, and ignoring all obstacles.

    And then there came a sound which Moonwatcher could not
    possibly have identified, for it had never been heard before
    in the history of this planet.

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    A10
    EXT CAVE - NEW ROCK

    Moonwatcher comes face to face with the New Rock when he
    leads the tribe down to the river in the first light of morning.
    He had almost forgotten the terror of the night, because nothing
    had happened after that initial noise, so he does not even
    associate this strange thing with danger or with fear. There
    is nothing in the least alarming about it.

    It is a cube about fifteen feet on a side, and it is made of
    some completely transparent material; indeed, it is not easy
    to see except when the light of the sun glints on its edges.
    There are no natural objects to which Moonwatcher can
    compare this apparition. Though he is wisely cautious
    of most new things, he does not hesitate to walk up to it.
    As nothing happens, he puts out his hand, and feels a warm,
    hard surface.

    After several minutes of intense thought, he arrives at a
    brilliant explanation. It is a rock, of course, and it
    must have grown during the night. There are many plants
    that do this - white, pulpy things shaped like pebbles, that
    seem to shoot up in the hours of darkness. It is true that
    they are small and round, whereas this is large and square;

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    A10
    CONTINUED

    but greater and later philosophers than Moonwatcher would be
    prepared to overlook equally striking exceptions to their laws.

    This really superb piece of abstract thinking leads Moonwatcher
    to a deduction which he immediately puts to the test. The white,
    round pebble-plants are very tasty (though there were a few
    that made one violently sick); perhaps this square one...?

    A few licks and attempted nibbles quickly disillusion him.
    There is no nourishment here; so like a sensible hominid, he
    continues on his way to the river and forgets all about the Cube.

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    A11
    EXT CUBE - FIRST LESSON

    They are still a hundred yards from the New Rock when the
    sound begins.

    It is quite soft, and it stops them in their tracks, so that they
    stand paralyzed on the trail with their jaws hanging. A simple,
    maddeningly repetitious rhythm pulses out of the crystal cube
    and hypnotises all who come within its spell. For the first
    time - and the last, for two million year - the sound of
    drumming is heard in Africa.

    The throbbing grows louder, more insistent. Presently the
    hominids begin to move forward like sleep-walkers, towards
    the source of that magnetic sound. Sometimes they take little
    dancing steps, as their blood responds to the rhythms that
    their descendants will not create for ages yet.

    Totally entranced, they gather around the Cube, forgetting
    the hardships of the day, the perils of the approaching dusk,
    and the hunger in their bellies.

    Now, spinning wheels of light begin to merge, and the spokes
    fuse into luminous bars that slowly recede into the distance,

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    A11
    CONTINUED

    rotating on their axes as they do; and the hominids watch, wide-
    eyed, mesmerized captives of the Crystal Cube.

    Then by some magic - though it was no more magical than all
    that had gone on before - a perfectly normal scene appears. It
    is as if a cubical block had been carved out of the day and
    shifted into the night. Inside that block is a group of four
    hominids, who might have been members of Moonwatcher's
    own tribe, eating chunks of meat. The carcass of a wart-hog
    lies near them.

    This little family of male and female and two children is gorged
    and replete, with sleek and glossy pelts - and this was a
    condition of life that Moonwatcher had never imagined. From
    time to time they stir lazily, as they loll at ease near the
    entrance of their cave, apparently at peace with the world.
    The spectacle of domestic bliss merges into a totally
    different scene.

    The family is no longer reposing peacefully outside its cave;
    it is foraging, searching for food like any normal hominids.

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    A11
    CONTINUED

    A small wart-hog ambles past the group of browsing humanoids
    without giving them more than a glance, for they had never been
    the slightest danger to its species.

    But that happy state of affairs is about to end. The big male
    suddenly bends down, picks up a heavy stone lying at his feet -
    and hurls it upon the unfortunate pig. The stone descends upon
    its skull, making exactly the same noise that Moonwatcher had
    produced in his now almost forgotten encounter with Big-Tooth.
    And the result, too, is much the same - the warthog gives one
    amazed, indignant squeal, and collapses in a motionless heap.

    Then the whole sequence begins again, but this time it unfolds
    itself with incredible slowness. Every detail of the movement
    can be followed; the stone arches leisurely through the air, the
    pig crumples up and sinks to the ground. There the scene
    freezes for long moments, the slayer standing motionless
    above the slain, the first of all weapons in his hand.

    The scene suddenly fades out. The cube is no more than a
    glimmering outline in the darkness; the hominids stir, as if

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    A11
    CONTINUED

    awakening from a dream, realise where they are, and scuttle
    back to their caves.

    They have no concious memory of what they had seen; but that
    night, as he sits brooding at the entrance of his lair, his ears
    attuned to the noises of the world around him, Moonwatcher
    feels the first faint twinges of a new and potent emotion - the urge
    to kill. He had taken his first step towards humanity.

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    A12
    EXT cave AND PLAINS - Utopia

    Babies were born and sometimes lived; feeble, toothless thirty-
    year-olds died; the lion took its toll in the night; the Others
    threatened daily across the river - and the trib prospered.
    In the course of a single year, Moonwatcher and his companions
    had changed almost beyond recognition.

    They had become as plump as the family in the Cave, who no
    longer haunted their dreams. They had learned their lessons
    well; now they could handle all the stone tools and weapons that
    the Cube had revealed to them.

    They were no longer half-numbed with starvation, and they
    had time both for leisure and for the first rudiments of thought.
    Their new way of life was casually accepted, and they did
    not associate it in any way with the crystal cube still standing
    outside their cave.

    But no Utopia is perfect, and this one had two blemishes. The
    first was the marauding lion, whose passion for hominids
    seemed to have grown even stronger now that they were better
    nourished. The second was the tribe across the river; for

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    A12
    CONTINUED

    somehow the Others had survived, and had stubbornly refused to
    die of starvation.

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    A13
    EXT CAVES - KILLING THE LION

    With the partly devoured carcass of a warthog laid out on the
    ground at the point he hope the boulder would impact, Moon-
    watcher and three of his bravest companions wait for two
    consecutive nights. On the third the lion comes,
    betraying his presences by a small pebble slide.

    When they can here the lion below, softly tearing at the meat,
    they strain themselves against the massive boulder. The sound
    of the lion stops; he is listening. Again they silently heave
    against the enormous stone, exerting the final limits of their
    strength. The rock begin to tip to a new balance point.

    The lion twitches alert to this sound, but having no fear of these
    creatures, he makes the first of two mistakes which will cost
    him his life; he goes back to his meal.

    The rock moves slowly over the ledge, picking up speed with
    amazing suddeness. It strikes a projection in the cliff about
    fifteen feet above the ground, which deflects its path outward.

    Just at this instant, the lion reacts instinctively and leaps
    away from the face of the cliff directly into the path of the

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    A13
    CONTINUED

    onrushing boulder. He has combined the errors of over-
    confidence and bad luck.

    The next morning they find the lion in front of the cave. They
    also find one of their tribe who had incautiously peeped out to
    see what was happening, and was apparently killed by a small
    rock torn loose by the boulder; but this was a small price to
    pay for such a great victory.

    * * * * * * * *

    And then one night the crystal cube was gone, and not even
    Moonwatcher ever thought of it again. He was still wholly
    unaware of all that it had done.

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    A14
    EXT STREAM - MASTER OF THE WORLD

    From their side of the stream, in the never violated safety of
    their own territory, the Others see Moonwatcher and fourteen
    males of his tribe appear from behind a small hillock over-
    looking the stream, silhouetted against the dawn sky.

    The Others begin to scream their daily challenge. But today
    something is different, though the Others do not immediatly
    recognize this fact.

    Instead of joining the verbal onslaught, as they had always done,
    Moonwatcher and his small band decended from the rise, and
    begin to move forward to the stream with a quiet purposefulness
    never befor seen.

    As the Others watch the figures silently approaching in the
    morning mist, they become aware of the terrible strangness
    of this encounter, and their rage gradually subsides down to
    an uneasy silence.

    At the water's edge, Moonwatcher and his band stop. They
    carry their bone clubs and bone knives.

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    A14
    CONTINUED

    Led by One-ear, the Others half-heartly resume the battle-
    chant. But they are suddenly confrunted with a vision that cuts
    the sound from their throats, and strikes terror into their
    hearts.

    Moonwatcher, who had been partly concealed by two males who
    walked before him, thrusts his arm high into the air. In his
    hand he holds a stoud tree branch. Mounted atop the branch is
    the bloody head of the lion, its mouth jammed open with a stick,
    displaying its frightful fangs.

    The Others gape in fearful disbelief at this display of power.

    Moonwatchers stands motionless, thrusting the lion's head high.
    Then with majestic deliberation, still carrying his mangled
    standard above his head, he begins to cross the stream, followed
    by his band.

    The Others fade back from the stream, seeming to lack even
    the ability to flee.

    Moonwatcher steps ashore and walks to One-Ear, who stands

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    A14
    CONTINUED

    unsurely in front of his band.

    Though he is a veteran of numerous combats at the water's edge,
    One-Ear has never been attacked by an enemy who had not first
    displayed his fighting rage; and he had never before been attacked
    with a weapon. One-Ear, merely looks up at the raised club
    until the heavey thigh bone of an antelope brings the darkness
    down around him.

    The Others stare in wonder at Moonwatcher's power.

    Moonwatcher surveys the scene. Now he was master of the
    world, and he was not sure what to do next. But he would
    think of something.

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    A SECTION TIMING

    A1 00.30
    A2 00.45
    A3 01.30
    A4 00.30
    A5 01.00
    A6 01.00
    A7 01.00
    A8 03.00
    A9 00.45
    A10 02.00
    A11 04.00
    A12 02.00
    A13 02.30
    A14 02.30

    A SECTION TOTAL: @23 MIN. 00 SECS
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    TITLE PART II

    YEAR 2001

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    B1
    EARTH FROM 200 MILES UP NARRATOR
    By the year 2001, overpopulation has
    B1a replaced the problem of starvation
    THOUSAND MEGATON but this was ominously offset by the
    NUCLEAR BOMB IN ORBIT absolute and utter perfection of the
    ABOVE THE EARTH, weapon.
    RUSSIAN INSIGNIA AND
    CCCP MARKINGS

    B1b NARRATOR
    AMERICAN THOUSAND Hundreds of giant bombs had been
    MEGATON BOMB IN ORBIT placed in perpetual orbit above the
    ABOVE THE EARTH. Earth. They were capable of
    incinerating the entire Earth's
    surface from an altitude of 100
    miles.

    B1c
    FRENCH BOMB NARRATOR
    Matters were further complicated
    by the presence of twenty-seven
    nations in the nuclear club. There
    had been no deliberate or acciden-
    B1d tal use of nuclear weapons since
    GERMAN BOMB World War II and some people felt
    sercure in this knowledge. But to
    others, the situation seemed
    comparible to an airline with a
    B1f perfect safety record; in showed
    CHINESE BOMB admirable care and skill but no
    one expected it to last forever.

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    B2
    ORION-III SPACECRAFT
    IN FIGHT AWAY FROM
    EARTH, 200 MILES
    ALTITUDE.

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    B3
    ORION-III PASSENGER AREA.
    DR. HEYWOOD FLOYD IS THE
    ONLY PASSENGER IN THE
    ELEGANT CABIN DESIGNED
    FOR 30 PEOPLE. HE IS
    ASLEEP.

    HIS PEN FLOATS NEAR HIS
    HAND.

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    B4
    ORION-III COCKPIT.
    PILOT, CO-PILOT.
    FLOYD CAN BE SEEN
    ASLEEP ON A SMALL
    TV MONITOR.
    STEWARDESS IS PUTTING
    ON LIPSTICK. SHE SEES
    PEN.

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    B5
    STEWARDESS GOES BACK
    TO PASSENGER AREA,
    RESCUES PEN AND CLIPS
    IT BACK IN FLOYD'S
    POCKET.

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    B6
    SPACE STATION-5. THE
    RAW SUNLIGHT OF SPACE
    DAZZLES FROM THE
    POLISHED METAL SURFACES
    OF THE SLOWLY REVOLVING,
    THOUSAND-FOOT DIAMETER
    SPACE STATION. DRIFTING
    IN THE SAME ORBIT, WE SEE
    SWEPT-BACK TITOV-V
    SPACECRAFT. ALSO THE
    ALMOST SPHERICAL ARIES-IB

    10/4/65 b6
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    B7
    ORION-III PASSENGER AREA
    FLOYD AWAKE BUT GROGGY,
    LOOKS OUT OF WINDOW.

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    B8
    ORION-III COCKPIT.
    THE CO-PILOT IN RADIO
    COMMUNICATION WITH THE
    SPACE STATION.

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    B9
    THE ORION-III SPACECRAFT
    IN DOCKING APPROACH. THE
    EARTH IS SEEN IN BREATH-
    TAKING VIEW IN B.G.

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    B10
    INSIDE DOCKING CONTROL.
    WE SEE ORION-III MANO-
    UVERING. IN BACKGROUND.

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    B11
    FROM DOCKING PORT WE
    SEE THE ORION-III INCHING
    IN TO COMPLETE ITS
    DOCKING. WE SEE VARIOUS
    WINDOWED BOOTHS INSIDE
    DOCKING PORT. WE SEE
    THE PILOT AND CO-PILOT
    INSIDE THE ORION-III
    COCKPIT.

    10/4/65 b11
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    B12
    SPACE STATION
    RECEPTION AREA

    RECEPTIONIST AT DESK.
    MILLER ENTERS, HUR-
    RYING. HE GOES TO
    THE ELEVATOR AND
    PRESSES BUTTON. HE
    WAITS IMPATIENTLY.

    WE SEE ELEVATOR
    INDICATOR WORKING

    ELEVATOR DOOR OPENS
    AND FLOYD IS SEEN
    UNSTRAPPING HIMSELF.
    THE ELEVATOR GIRL IS
    SEATED BY THE DOOR
    MILLER
    Oh, good morning, Dr. Floyd.
    I'm Nick Miller.

    FLOYD
    How do you do, Mr. Miller?

    MILLER
    I'm terribly sorry. I was just
    on my way down to meet you. I
    saw your ship dock and I knew I
    had plenty of time, and I was on
    my way out of the office when,
    suddenly, the phone rang.

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    B12
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Oh, please don't worry about it.

    MILLER
    Well, thank you very much for
    being so understanding.

    FLOYD
    Please, it really doesn't matter.

    MILLER
    Well.. Did you have a pleaant
    flight?

    FLOYD
    Yes, very pleasant.

    MILLER
    Well, shall we go through
    Documentation?

    FLOYD
    Fine.

    RECEPTIONIST
    Will you use number eight,
    please?

    MILLER
    Thank you, Miss Turner.

    12/7/65 b13
    --------------------------------...
    B12
    CONTINUED

    THEY ENTER PASSPORT
    AREA

    RECEPTIONIST PRESSES
    "ENGLISH" BAR ON HER
    CONSOLE AND SMILES
    AS FLOYD GOES THROUGH.

    12/7/65 b13a
    --------------------------------...
    IN AUTOMATED PASSPORT
    SECTION. THEY STOP IN
    FRONT OF A BOOTH
    FEATURING A TV SCREEN

    PASSPORT GIRL (TV)
    Good morning and welcome to voice
    Print Identification. When you see
    the red light go on would you please
    state in the following order; your
    desitination, your nationality and
    your full name. Surname first,
    christian name and initial. For
    example: Moon, American,
    Smith, John, D. Thank you.

    THERE IS A PAUSE
    AND A RED BAR LIGHTS UP

    FLOYD
    Moon, American, Floyd, Heywood,
    R.

    THE RED LIGHT GOES OFF.
    THERE IS A DELAY OF
    ABOUT TWO SECONDS AND
    THE WOMAN'S FACE
    REAPPEARS

    FLOYD
    I've always wondered....

    12/7/65 b14
    --------------------------------...
    B13
    CONTINUED
    PASSPORT GIRL (TV)
    (Interrupting) Thank you. Despite
    and excellent and continually
    improving safety record there are
    certain risks inherent in space
    travel and an extremely high cost
    of pay load. Because of this it
    is necessary for the Space Carrier
    to advise you that it cannot be
    responsible for the return of your
    body to Earth should you become
    deceased on the Moon or en route
    to the Moon. However, it wishes
    to advise you that insurance
    covering this contingency is
    available in the Main Lounge.
    Thank you. You are cleared
    through Voice Print Identification.

    THE LIGHTS GO OFF
    AND THE WOMAN'S
    FACE DISAPPEARS

    THE MEN EXIT THE
    PASSPORT AREA

    MILLER
    I've reserved a table for you in
    the Earth Light room. Your
    connecting flight will be
    leaving in about one hour.

    12/7/65 b15
    --------------------------------...
    B13
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Oh, that's wonderful.

    12/7/65 b16
    --------------------------------...
    B14
    INT SPACE STATION - LOUNGE

    FLOYD AND MILLER WALKING

    MILLER
    Let's see, we haven't had the
    pleasure of a visit from you not
    since... It was about eight or
    nine months ago, wasn't it?

    FLOYD
    Yes, I think so. Just about
    then.

    MILLER
    I suppose you saw the work on
    our new section while you
    were docking.

    FLOYD
    Yes, it's coming along very well.

    THEY PASS THE VISION
    PHONE BOOTH

    FLOYD
    Oh, look, I've got to make a
    phone call. Why don't you go
    on into the Restaurant and I'll
    meet you in there.

    12/7/65 b17
    --------------------------------...
    B14
    CONTINUED

    MILLER
    Fine. I'll see you at the bar.

    FLOYD ENTERS PHONE
    BOOTH. SIGN ON
    VISION PHONE SCREEN
    "SORRY, TEMPORARILY
    OUT OF ORDER."

    HE ENTERS THE SECOND
    BOOTH AND SITS DOWN

    12/7/65 b18
    --------------------------------...
    B15
    DELETED

    B16
    DELETED

    PAGES b19 - b22 DELETED

    12/7/65
    --------------------------------...
    B17
    FLOYD IN VISION PHONE

    LITTLE GIRL OF FIVE
    ANSWERS

    CHILD
    Hello.

    VISION PHONE SCREEN
    DISPLAY SIGN 'YOUR
    PARTY HAS NOT CONNECTED
    VISION'

    A FEW SECONDS LATER,
    THE SCREEN CHANGES
    TO AN IMAGE OF THE
    CHILD
    FLOYD
    Hello, darling, how are you?

    CHILD
    Hello Daddy. Where are you?

    FLOYD
    I'm at Space Station Five,
    darling. How are you?

    CHILD
    I'm fine, Daddy. When are
    you coming home?

    12/6/65 b23
    --------------------------------...
    B17
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Well, I hope in a few days,
    sweetheart.

    CHILD
    I'm having a party tomorrow.

    FLOYD
    Yes, I know that sweetheart.

    CHILD
    Are you coming to my party?

    FLOYD
    No, I'm sorry, darling, I
    told you I won't be home for a
    few days.

    CHILD
    When are you coming home?

    FLOYD
    In three days, darling, I
    hope.

    FLOYD HOLDS UP
    THREE FINGERS.

    12/6/65 b24
    --------------------------------...
    B17

    FLOYD
    One, two, three. Can I
    speak to Mommy?

    CHILD
    Mommy's out to the hair-
    dresser.

    FLOYD
    Where is Mrs. Brown?

    CHILD
    She's in the bathroom.

    FLOYD
    Okay, sweetheart. Well, I
    have to go now. Tell Mommy
    that I called.

    CHILD
    How many days until you
    come home?

    FLOYD
    Three, darling. One... two
    ... three. Be sure to tell
    Mommy I called.

    12/6/65 b24a
    --------------------------------...
    B17
    CONTINUED

    CHILD
    I will, Daddy.

    FLOYD
    Okay, sweetheart. Have a
    lovely Birthday Party
    tomorrow.

    CHILD
    Thank you, Daddy.

    FLOYD
    I'll wish you a happy
    Birthday now and I'll see you
    soon. All right, Darling?

    CHILD
    Yes, Daddy.

    FLOYD
    'Bye, 'bye, now, sweetheart.

    CHILD
    Goodbye, Daddy.

    12/6/65 b24b
    --------------------------------...
    B18
    VISION PHONE
    PROCEDURE FOR
    INFORMATION

    VISION PHONE
    PROCEDURE FOR
    DIALLING

    OPERATOR
    Good morning, Macy's.

    FLOYD
    Good morning. I'd like the
    Vision shopper for the Pet
    Shop, please.

    OPERATOR
    Just one moment.

    12/7/65 b25
    --------------------------------...
    B19
    THE PICTURE FLIPS AND
    WE SEE A WOMAN STANDING
    IN FORN OF A SPECIALLY-
    DESIGNED DISPLAY SCREEN

    VISION SALES GIRL
    Good morning, sir, may I help you?

    FLOYD
    Yes, I'd like to buy a bush baby.

    VISION SALES GIRL
    Just a moment, sir.

    THE GIRL KEYS SOME
    INPUTS AND A MOVING
    PICTURE APPEARS ON
    THE SCREEN OF A CAGE
    CONTAINING ABOUT SIX
    BUSH BABIES,
    BEAUTIFULLY DISPLAYED
    AGAINST A WHITE BACK-
    GROUND

    I could not add any more due to character count.

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