quick crit

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• bomy_dick0

  i would speed up a bit the intro flash, make it more dynamice.. i suppose it has to be smooth and slow.. but it's too slow..
  it's not obvious to find the pages (next page ) i 'd put an little something in color or make it stand out a bit more.

  The layout is simple but effective.. the messages are clear : i like that
  id put some more visuals on the background or somewhere.. too much text i think

  it's nice anyway

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