Critique Please

Out of context: Reply #57

  • Started
  • Last post
  • 83 Responses
  • letters20

    Hey gramme, I'm happy to suggest a few faces to explore.

    Escrow:
    http://www.fontbureau.com/fonts/…
    For a scotch roman, I've recently been coveting highsmith's Escrow as it balances the old/new in a serif with great tensions. Might bring the formal/friendly mix you need.

    Chronicle:
    http://www.typography.com/fonts/…
    This is kind of a new-wave scotch in a way, but its got character.

    Feijoa:
    http://vllg.com/KLIM/Feijoa/mudT…
    This Kris Sowersby face is a bit more organic, round, and could carry your leaves well. It breaks from the rigid "T" you're using, but you could try swapping it out for one in this family.

    Lineare:
    http://www.myfonts.com/fonts/ert…
    Eduardo Tunni's face heads off in another direction, certainly still a text face, but with different/newer quirks than the others.

    Or you could go for good contrast, and work with a san serif to see if you can build a different kind of relationship. Either way, I would definitely encourage using a titling case, rather than all-caps, as it will help with legibility and also perhaps undo that top button that keeps it looking as if its wound a bit tight.

    Thanks for the compliment :)
    Much luck! happy to have another look if you do any revising.

    letters2 0Permalink
    UpvoteDownvote
    Flag
    • Feloja is nice.
      neverliked Linera, there are better opportunities      moamoa
    Show [[ numHiddenNotes ]] more notesAdd Note
    SaveCancel

View thread