what do you think of this?

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  • TaylorB0

    Good animation/animation...! and overall great work... Very thorough.

    A few thoughts:

    On the intro page...
    - The pink type doesn't really work... Maybe experiment with some other fonts.
    - Also... I really like the blue band below the ticket, but I think it resolution is low or something like that. It could be much sharper.
    - I found that the intro page was a bit misleading... in that it doesn't represent the illustration graphics on the main page.

    On the main page...
    - The illustration graphics work well within itself, but (again, like I said) they don't match the outer frame (the stacked papers and wood background).
    - it looks like two styles are conflicting here.

    Well...I hope this helps
    Cheers mate

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