Dreamten Studios
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- detritus0
I'm not keen on the change in interaction between the nav and main header - it looks better to me on the front page, where it's just a block divide. The 'curved' shadow thing on the other pages looks a bit incongruous.
I'd also change your portrait photo - its MySpace low quality feel jars heavily. Also, if I were you, I'd not bother posting the DreamTen alternatives you've put in your blog - having them there is a bit hokey and detracts from the illusion of The Best Solution given by final site. I think you could make your contact page look a bit better too (buttons, layout) - you particularly need to clarify the red Required Fields thing. Though, I do like the way you've highlighted their requirement after submission.
All these tiddly things aside, I really like it. As Moamoa says, it makes you look a lot bigger than you are (which begs the question - should you refer to yourself in the third or first person in your dialogue?) and I think it presses all the right buttons where potential clients are concerned.
I particularly like the overall colour scheme and the USA Topcoat highlight on the frontpage - I hope you can integrate future projects just as ably!
Nice job, son. Good luck.
- ps. why no 'About the project' text?detritus
- 'incongruous'
check out who's using their word of the day jacks-roll again!ian - ohnoes, i've been reeling that one out for years - though you're on to something, I am nothing if not pretentious.detritus
- ahahaha! good word though, gonna try slip it into a conversation today...ian